Toptube
Anti-cabbage Party Candidate
Joined: 23 Apr 2007
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 Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2014 12:39 pm |
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| Rokkan wrote: |
Sorry for taking so long, but here's a PDF (not in full printing quality because of filesize restraints, but it's pretty good quality!) of my project! It's all in brazillian portuguese but I'm currently working for a translated english version too, though the text isn't the main attraction here, I feel
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/20235127/womeningames_ptbr2.pdf
Enjoy & tell me what you think! |
I can't read it, so my critique is completely about the visual aspect. Overall, it looks very nice. Very clean and mostly easy to follow layout.
My two nit-pick negative comments are:
1. that the second page with several characters crammed together----looks notably less "full" than the first page. There are more gaps and it feels a little weird, visually. Also, I think you were trying to use every character individually----but I noticed Chie is used twice?
2.Gum and Ooh La La are too close togehter. They almost feel like the the same profile, at first. I mean, it becomes clear they are different characters, but I feel like their artwork is a little too close together. |
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