[scratchmonkey]

- I would tune down the "The End" thing. Maybe just one or two quick flashes rather than an extended sequence?

- It seems choppy, in that it goes, bridge, in car, abstract lights, girl on sidewalk, bridge, in car, driving down a street, bridge, in car/quick cuts with city (I think). It may be that you had this intentionally structured, so ignore this if you did. However! If not, for one thing, I think you could do with more of the super-abstracted light shots spread out over the piece instead of a clutch of them at the start. Then, I feel like a more narrative flow would work better, maybe something like bridge, bridge, abstract lights, driving on streets, girl on sidewalk, driving on streets, abstract lights, bridge, bridge.

- Deffo like the colors and the synching is well done. It's difficult to tell that it's really a collection of stills and not a chopped-up high-quality video.